Status: Okay so I'm not deleting my stories... But I am rewriting them so please be patient with me (8 months ago)
| Name | Monica |
| Location | USA |
| Member Since | Feb 19, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 13 |
Hello my name is Monica :) Im 15 i love to write stories and listen to music. I love my music very much <33 i'm very artistic and love to draw also. I want to be a photographer and saving money to buy a camera! I used to dye my hair various colors But then I got bored I'll do it Again... Eventually I love to laugh A LOT I read a lot of books I Day dream alot and sometimes i lose myself in my thoughts at inappropriate times! I am also a romantic who believes in true love and such :3 - don't judge I never tell secrets or break promises unless its life threatening! Srry I'm a very Honest person I'm also kinda shy at first and quiet But once I know u more I'm loud, And random! I'm kinda weird too but I dont care I listen to Paramore, Avril Lavigne, Breaking Benjamin, Skillet, Asking Alexandria, Black Veil Brides, Escape the Fate, Godsmack, etc. I'm a great listener and super easy to talk to :)
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 | Good and Deadly6 parts / 11 pages, updated Apr 01, 2012 Caleb Knight has been surviving on his own for a while. But when he is caught by Maura's scouts, he learns how to Kill Maura herself. How? Maura's sister must kill her. Cal... read more 186 reads  6  18 |
 | Tears Of Pearl7 parts / 10 pages, updated Feb 23, 2012 Elani doesn't trust humans. Makes sense, she is a mermaid after all. But what happens when she is taken by pirates during a hunting trip and there she meets Damon, Captain o... read more 351 reads 7 5 |
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ForeverSmile413
9 months ago
@feathersnake haha your rambling is very helpful and I will definitely try everything you shared! Thank you
feathersnake
10 months ago
@ForeverSmile413 Haha. I understand. I winged mine at first too. Some outlines and notes should help you out a lot. I briefly outline everything plot-wise that I have figured out and take notes on everything new I think of, even if it's something small or something that won't show up in the actual writing of the story. Keeping notes about everything involving your characters is more helpful than it might seem. I recommend it, even if the thing you realize is something as simple as "so-and-so likes marshmallows in his coffee" or "this is what happened in this character's past even though they are a side character that only shows up for a very brief period." I believe that as the author you tend to know more about your story and characters than a reader may ever know. But even if some of those things never show up in the story, it helps you have a grip on your characters and how the story plays out. All of it makes the story more solid and natural. Of course there may be some things you take note of that you decide aren't true later. But that happens in editing as well. Haha. Sorry. I rambled a bit there. >.< I don't even know if it was helpful rambling either. XD; Good luck though! I can't wait to see where your writing goes!
ForeverSmile413
10 months ago
@feathersnake I really appreciate your support, it means a lot (: and I've decided to rewrite them but I need to do a little rough draft for my self. I really just winged both of them. I didn't think more in depth of how my stories were going to play out and I think that's why I lost interest.
feathersnake
10 months ago
@ForeverSmile413 It's sad to see a plot with so much potential go, but you're the one writing it. So if you feel that you can't continue right now, then it's your decision. I look forward to seeing what you do in the future, whether it's a new story or a rewrite. :)
ForeverSmile413
10 months ago
@feathersnake I'm sorry to say i've just lost interest in them and maybe eventually i'll rewrite it and put it up again.
feathersnake
10 months ago
(status) Why is that? :/
Mylifeisntreal
1 year ago
@ForeverSmile413 np
ForeverSmile413
1 year ago
@Mylifeisntreal Thank you for fanning me :)
Mylifeisntreal
1 year ago
@ForeverSmile413 Hey
ForeverSmile413
1 year ago
@Mylifeisntreal Hello Shadow :) I'm Monica
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@CharlieCello lol im glad :D I just hope i keep her actions and personality the way you picture it!!
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