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Hey everyone :) I'm not going to put my name for anonymities sake but I am a 17 year old female, completely utterly insane and i am a certified pervert thanks to my friends so i apologize in advance for dirty-mindedness.

I read anything and everything on this site so if you want me to check out your works don't hesitate to give me a yell :)

The book i am working on at the moment is Playing The Devil but i am thinking of posting another of the many things i have so so many drafts of which is called Cut, i figured i'd have a playful book and a serious book :P

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Cut

Social data: 260 reads. 10 votes. 16 comments.

Description: I do not want to be afraid I do not want to die inside just to breathe in I'm tired of feeling so numb Relief exists I find it when I am cut I may seem crazy Or painfully shy And these scars wouldn't be so hidden If you would just look me...


Other Works by FireworkMonkey.
Playing The Devil (book 1 Heaven and Hell series) ©

Playing The Devil (book 1 Heaven and Hell series) ©

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Lizabine lives in Hell ... literally, the Devil is H.O.T and thinks he can get whatever he wants except...

FireworkMonkey commented on Amo Illum Mori


FireworkMonkey
I'm happy to help, I know the people on wattpad don't tend to critique unless they really dislike what you've written so I hope I helped, you truly are a gifted writer and I look forward to reading more of your works :)
FireworkMonkey commented on Amo Illum Mori


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I recommend putting commas in places so the rhymes make sense for example how you read it in your head or out loud there are pauses? At the beginning this is very good but past half way I had to back track to recall how it was supposed to sound. Also one particular part I suggest editing is where it says 'swear no pain shall you shall feel' however other than those minor editing properties that I suggest, I thought this poem was amazing and I'm quite glad my friend sent me this link just so I could read it :)