Nothing changes. Ever. She sits at the piano playing the same song. Dead rose petals always skirt about...
Description: He is darkness. He is demon. She is light. She is a savior. When the demon saves the savior, a pattern unfolds and a story unwinds, and the whole world waits with baited breath as every step seems to mirror the first. Because in the first story...
Sort of. The demon girl has more white hair and brighter eyes and paler skin, but Elai closely resembles them cause she's "Aryan" (in our terms, if you want to get technical). But the demons can be easily told apart as they exhibit much stranger behaviors, have super strength and speed, magic, and can turn into "those indescribable things" when they attack
What-what do I mean? The demon girl in chapter 3 is what I mean.
OH I JUST RE-READ THE SYNOPSIS AND AHHHHH. So I'm getting the feeling that at this moment I still have no concept of who is a main character (well...everyone sort of is, right? hahah)...uhm, so, is Elai not that demon girl with the ring incident in which Garnet was torn apart and obliterated?
@raindrop Totally get you on that. First impressions matter. Oh, right, the comments... Eh, I'll figure it out. It's just that so many characters are ambiguous and they will never get a chance to be 'on screen' again, so I don't want to leave all of them in the dark. But like I said, I will figure it out.
He led his night-blood steed behind him, and the horse never made a sound as it went. Not a whinny or grunt or even a swish of its mane disturbed the ambience around them.
Pssh, horse don't need air. Horse don't care!
Yes. I wanted to use something other than ellipses (I use lots of ellipses in my writing...) [ <- oh no, there they are!]
Chapter Four of "WRITE THIS DOWN" is now up. Chapter Five will be out eventually.
@raindrop oh gotcha. thanks ^^ any others...? I felt like I made a lot of mistakes on this one... or at least I expected to since I didn't really edit it before putting it up *mutter mutter*
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