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Write This Down

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Description: He is darkness. He is demon. She is light. She is a savior. When the demon saves the savior, a pattern unfolds and a story unwinds, and the whole world waits with baited breath as every step seems to mirror the first. Because in the first story...

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Firebender_Zeke commented on Write This Down - 4

He led his night-blood steed behind him, and the horse never made a sound as it went. Not a whinny or grunt or even a swish of its mane disturbed the ambience around them. 
Pssh, horse don't need air. Horse don't care!
Chapter Two of WRITE THIS DOWN is now up. I would appreciate any critiquing/suggestions.
Chapter Three and Four shall also be coming soon. 

As a side note: These chapters are always, in my mind, "unfinished". This is a rough draft after all. As it is a rough draft, expect errors as usual, but also expect that things will be changed, plots and characters will be better flushed out, and hopefully the book will become better all around once I get to working on the next (hopefully final) draft. 
So if you have suggestions/comments/critiques on how to make a character stand out more, questions about characters, ideas for how to make things BETTER, tell me! I really, really, REALLY want to hear it. I want to be able to share this story with you, and that's not quite possible if what is in my head is not getting out on the page.
New novel WRITE THIS DOWN is up. Just the prologue and first chapter. Chapter 2 coming soon!
This is my NaNo novel, so expect errors and problems, and all sorts of other beautiful issues that come with rough drafts. Editing is much appreciated but will not be addressed till after NaNo due to time constraints.
I will be working on Orpheus Rising after NaNo (maybe a little during...) so do not give up on that one ^^ But do come by and show Write This Down some love and attention.