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Ferretlp

Name Ferret
Location Riding into the sunset.
Member Since Feb 07, 2011
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My pen name is Cynthia Wildeson, but you can call me Ferret.
All hail the holy vorpal ferret bird of the sun.

Currently working on: Lordess of the Depths, random poems, weird-ass short stories, and (failing at) rewriting Aurlin.

My guide to dialogue:
http://www.wattpad.com/forums/vanilla/discussion/745217/ferret-s-guide-to-dialogue-grammar
Grammar is fun.

Works

White Wings and Ivory Towers

White Wings and Ivory Towers

10 parts / 53 pages, updated Mar 18, 2014PG-13PicturesCompleted
A collection of short stories and other various works, including: "Of Glass and Roses" "The Manor by the Bay" "The Gardens of Hadr... read more
985 reads votes 36 comments 38
Lordess of the Depths (The Write Awards 2014 entry)

Lordess of the Depths (The Write Awards 2014 entry)

9 parts / 31 pages, updated Mar 10, 2014PG-13
Centuries after the nuclear Cleansing, half of the world lives in static order, deep in the lawful North, where blood and arms command ab... read more
525 reads votes 23 comments 19
Ferretsgurble

Ferretsgurble

50 parts / 11 pages, updated Mar 07, 2014PG
tags / ferret hail poems
2,928 reads votes 241 comments 120
The King's Shadow

The King's Shadow

8 parts / 34 pages, updated Sep 01, 2013PG-13
Lord Renfield is an influential nobleman, eccentric enough to abandon his estates to his trusted friends, but intelligent enough to gain the trust of the king. However... read more
476 reads votes 25 comments 25
Jupiter Rex

Jupiter Rex

17 parts / 51 pages, updated Mar 31, 2013PG-13
Earth exists no longer. Humanity has settled itself across the entire solar system, manipulating the souls of each planet to better suit the needs of man. As the generations g... read more
1,255 reads votes 43 comments 29
The Skies of Aurlin

The Skies of Aurlin

22 parts / 94 pages, updated Oct 27, 2012PG-13Pictures
"We are not immortal." The people of Aurlin live a near perfect society. Schooled from birth to be the best of intellectuals in all aspects, housed in a cat... read more
5,165 reads votes 241 comments 159

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My last critique I think can be applied to the dialogue as well. At many points, the dialogue felt very scripted and not quite real. Don't get me...
Fate's Play {unedited}{on h...

So I'm a teeny bit confused about something. In the last chapter you said the story would be in third person, but that chapter and this one are...
Fate's Play {unedited}{on h...

The writing itself in this chapter I thought was quite fine. For the most part, it was straightforward and clear, maybe needing a bit more...
Fate's Play {unedited}{on h...

Just to continue from my critique on the last chapter, I noticed that you had many more details concerning the setting and the appearance of the...
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So I do agree with what a lot of people below mentioned; you're writing is very strong. It's easy to see everything that is occurring, since you...
The Door of Shadows

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