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Ferretlp

Name Ferret
Location Riding into the sunset.
Member Since Feb 07, 2011
Votes Received 601
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My pen name is Cynthia Wildeson, but you can call me Ferret.
All hail the holy vorpal ferret bird of the sun.

Currently working on: Lordess of the Depths, Across the Burning Sea (kinda), random poems, weird-ass short stories, and (failing at) rewriting Aurlin.

My guide to dialogue:
http://www.wattpad.com/forums/vanilla/discussion/745217/ferret-s-guide-to-dialogue-grammar
Grammar is fun.

Works

Across the Burning Sea

Across the Burning Sea

7 parts / 19 pages, updated Apr 23, 2014PG-13
Aurel always knew that Harrison Sanford was not his real father, only a man who shared the same, terrible power: the Sight. Otherwise clueless of his birth, Aurel ... read more
43 reads votes 5 comments 0
White Wings and Ivory Towers

White Wings and Ivory Towers

10 parts / 53 pages, updated Mar 18, 2014PG-13PicturesCompleted
A collection of short stories and other various works, including: "Of Glass and Roses" "The Manor by the Bay" "The Gardens of Hadr... read more
1,124 reads votes 46 comments 57
Lordess of the Depths (The Write Awards 2014 entry)

Lordess of the Depths (The Write Awards 2014 entry)

9 parts / 31 pages, updated Mar 10, 2014PG-13
Centuries after the nuclear Cleansing, half of the world lives in static order, deep in the lawful North, where blood and arms command ab... read more
604 reads votes 25 comments 24
Ferretsgurble

Ferretsgurble

50 parts / 11 pages, updated Mar 07, 2014PG
tags / ferret hail poems
2,943 reads votes 241 comments 120
Jupiter Rex

Jupiter Rex

17 parts / 51 pages, updated Mar 31, 2013PG-13
Earth exists no longer. Humanity has settled itself across the entire solar system, manipulating the souls of each planet to better suit the needs of man. As the generations g... read more
1,268 reads votes 43 comments 29
The Skies of Aurlin

The Skies of Aurlin

22 parts / 94 pages, updated Oct 27, 2012PG-13Pictures
"We are not immortal." The people of Aurlin live a near perfect society. Schooled from birth to be the best of intellectuals in all aspects, housed in a cat... read more
5,185 reads votes 241 comments 159

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Finally, to be honest, I can't see the point of this prologue. All I'm reading is a sickly sweet conversation of two kids in love. While the...
Nothing Without You

So firstly, you switch tenses. You begin the chapter in past tense ("the wind /caressed/"), but you slip into present tense from the end of the...
Nothing Without You

Heh, all right. I wasn't expecting that. So at the moment, I actually don't have much to add on from my previous critique besides a few minor...
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Finally, I wasn't a big fan of how her father was portrayed, especially with Charles as well. You do a couple things that are a little common to...
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All right, so firstly, I'd like to say that as first chapter go, this is the best I've seen in a while. I like to think that a first chapter needs...
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