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EyeofKraid

Name Kay-Joy
Location Ireland
Member Since Oct 06, 2011
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When darkness grows
And anger shows
It's fearful face to all
When sorrow strikes
And kills the light
Just close your eyes and fall

Into a world of treasured gold
Of stories never told
Of heros bold and cities old
This world is yours to hold

So welcome here
My weary friends
Drink up and breathe and smile
Within Kraid's Eye
You'll find out why
You want to stay a while

Welcome :) Please don't be silent readers! Comment, vote, etc. If you have any constructive criticism, please share it. I'm here to learn and gain experience. I'm a writer: not a poet, not a novelist. I'll write anything, so don't be expecting to always have more of the same. My style varies with my mood. So please, enjoy!
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If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.  ~Toni Morrison

Do not put statements in the negative form.
And don't start sentences with a conjunction.
If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a
great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing.
Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do.
Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all.
De-accession euphemisms.
If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
Last, but not least, avoid cliches like the plague.
~William Safire, "Great Rules of Writing"

A synonym is a word you use when you can't spell the other one.  ~Baltasar Gracián

The best time for planning a book is while you're doing the dishes.  ~Agatha Christie

I think it's bad to talk about one's present work, for it spoils something at the root of the creative act.  It discharges the tension.  ~Norman Mailer

You never have to change anything you got up in the middle of the night to write.  ~Saul Bellow

Works

Beautiful Perfection

Beautiful Perfection

1 page, updated Jan 23, 2013GCompleted
3 reads votes 0 comments 1
Dear World

Dear World

1 page, updated Jan 03, 2013GCompleted
The battle is over; the war, begun...
2 reads votes 0 comments 0
Kraid - Dream On [On Hold]

Kraid - Dream On [On Hold]

34 parts / 77 pages, updated Dec 09, 2012PG
Rachel knows her dreams aren't real. But when a strange series of events leaves her stranded in another dimension, she has to admit that things are not as they seem.... read more
2,239 reads votes 39 comments 55
A Golden Christmas

A Golden Christmas

4 pages, updated Dec 04, 2012GCompleted
Christmas can uncover joy that's been hidden for years and some even greater mysteries...
6 reads votes 0 comments 2
Not Here

Not Here

1 page, updated Nov 28, 2012GCompleted
I don't want to be here...
7 reads votes 0 comments 2
Peace [not] Present Here

Peace [not] Present Here

1 page, updated Nov 27, 2012GCompleted
Warning: frustration contained
2 reads votes 0 comments 0
Riddle the Drizzle

Riddle the Drizzle

1 page, updated Nov 07, 2012GCompleted
9 reads votes 1 comments 3
Reach

Reach

1 page, updated Aug 27, 2012GCompleted
I'll reach through the past to who I once was...
4 reads votes 1 comments 0
Another Bright Day

Another Bright Day

1 page, updated Aug 16, 2012GCompleted
A little bit of hope in the darkness.
26 reads votes 1 comments 2
Four Letters

Four Letters

1 page, updated Aug 10, 2012GCompleted
What is love?
12 reads votes 2 comments 4
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AshleyTonyOrtiz
AshleyTonyOrtiz

2 months ago
Thanks for adding The Queen's Riddle to your reading list! I hope you will like the next upload! :D
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

3 months ago
You guys are going to hate me... I know, and I'm sorry. But what I was afraid would happen has happened. I found a story on Wattpad with the title of a story I had been writing and it had an incredibly similar story line, and the same tags. Maybe I'm being paranoid. But I love writing, and maybe I won't ever make a profession of it, but I want to keep my options open. Letting other people take my ideas won't do that. So, I'll leave most of my poems up, but my stories are coming down. I'm sorry! But stealing my ideas frustrates me (though I'm semi-flattered that someone liked the idea enough) and I'm not going to take that risk with books I really love. I hope you still enjoy the stuff I do choose to share!

~Kraid
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

3 months ago
@CharlotteAshley Haha! Thanks :)
CharlotteAshley
CharlotteAshley

3 months ago
@EyeofKraid More poetry should sound nice and less should be formulaic! I wish you luck! :D
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

3 months ago
@CharlotteAshley Thanks so much! And don't worry, I'm no expert. I just write what I think sounds nice. I don't go by any poetry formulas, but I admire people who can stick to them :)

I haven't read Bazza'jo yet. The description looks really exciting though! I can't wait to get some free time to read it :)
CharlotteAshley
CharlotteAshley

3 months ago
Thanks for adding Bazza'jo to your library! I'll have a look at your poetry - though I'm not much of an expert there. ;) My knowledge of poetry begins and ends with Eliot...
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

3 months ago
New update on To Take A Life and TWO new poems =D Please read, comment and critique! It means a lot =D
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

4 months ago
@Samwell1000 No problem at all :)
SettheSun
SettheSun

4 months ago
Sorry I haven't critiqued your story yet. I PROMISE I WILL. I'm going to have to ask you for a little bit longer though  for I've gotten very busy. 
Thank you!
Sammy
EyeofKraid
EyeofKraid

4 months ago
New poem uploaded =D

http://www.wattpad.com/10616986-dear-world

Please read it and let me know what you think :) Also, get ready for new To Take A Life update this weekend. I'm moving house, but I'll still manage to fit it in :P

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