| Name | Kay-Joy |
| Location | Ireland |
| Member Since | Oct 06, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 57 |
When darkness grows And anger shows It's fearful face to all When sorrow strikes And kills the light Just close your eyes and fall Into a world of treasured gold Of stories never told Of heros bold and cities old This world is yours to hold So welcome here My weary friends Drink up and breathe and smile Within Kraid's Eye You'll find out why You want to stay a while Welcome :) Please don't be silent readers! Comment, vote, etc. If you have any constructive criticism, please share it. I'm here to learn and gain experience. I'm a writer: not a poet, not a novelist. I'll write anything, so don't be expecting to always have more of the same. My style varies with my mood. So please, enjoy! _______________________________________________________________________________ If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it. ~Toni Morrison Do not put statements in the negative form. And don't start sentences with a conjunction. If you reread your work, you will find on rereading that a great deal of repetition can be avoided by rereading and editing. Never use a long word when a diminutive one will do. Unqualified superlatives are the worst of all. De-accession euphemisms. If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is. Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky. Last, but not least, avoid cliches like the plague. ~William Safire, "Great Rules of Writing" A synonym is a word you use when you can't spell the other one. ~Baltasar Gracián The best time for planning a book is while you're doing the dishes. ~Agatha Christie I think it's bad to talk about one's present work, for it spoils something at the root of the creative act. It discharges the tension. ~Norman Mailer You never have to change anything you got up in the middle of the night to write. ~Saul Bellow
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Thanks for adding The Queen's Riddle to your reading list! I hope you will like the next upload! :D
You guys are going to hate me... I know, and I'm sorry. But what I was afraid would happen has happened. I found a story on Wattpad with the title of a story I had been writing and it had an incredibly similar story line, and the same tags. Maybe I'm being paranoid. But I love writing, and maybe I won't ever make a profession of it, but I want to keep my options open. Letting other people take my ideas won't do that. So, I'll leave most of my poems up, but my stories are coming down. I'm sorry! But stealing my ideas frustrates me (though I'm semi-flattered that someone liked the idea enough) and I'm not going to take that risk with books I really love. I hope you still enjoy the stuff I do choose to share! ~Kraid
@CharlotteAshley Haha! Thanks :)
@EyeofKraid More poetry should sound nice and less should be formulaic! I wish you luck! :D
@CharlotteAshley Thanks so much! And don't worry, I'm no expert. I just write what I think sounds nice. I don't go by any poetry formulas, but I admire people who can stick to them :) I haven't read Bazza'jo yet. The description looks really exciting though! I can't wait to get some free time to read it :)
Thanks for adding Bazza'jo to your library! I'll have a look at your poetry - though I'm not much of an expert there. ;) My knowledge of poetry begins and ends with Eliot...
New update on To Take A Life and TWO new poems =D Please read, comment and critique! It means a lot =D
@Samwell1000 No problem at all :)
Sorry I haven't critiqued your story yet. I PROMISE I WILL. I'm going to have to ask you for a little bit longer though for I've gotten very busy. Thank you! Sammy
New poem uploaded =D http://www.wattpad.com/10616986-dear-world Please read it and let me know what you think :) Also, get ready for new To Take A Life update this weekend. I'm moving house, but I'll still manage to fit it in :P