YuffieProductio...
9 months ago

Thanks for the comment! I'm really glad it wasn't predictable. And replying to your rely below, I'm so happy to hear you think Hero is so deep. :)

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YuffieProductio...
9 months ago

Thanks so much for the comment! No problem that it's not critiquing. Sometimes it's good to know what you're doing correctly, too. ^__^ 

I'm glad you find Hero to have depth! During the beginning chapters, everyone would comment how Hero was too perfect and flat, and I had to keep telling them to keep reading. xP He seemed perfect because he knows how to act perfect. It was terribly difficult to hold my tongue. I just wanted to yell out: HE'S A FLIPPING PSYCHOPATH. HE IS NOT PERFECT. 
Anyway, thanks again, and yes, time bomb is a perfect likeness. xD

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YuffieProductio...
10 months ago

@ElizaSophia Yeah, that's fine, haha. Thank you for understanding!

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ElizaSophia
10 months ago

@YuffieProductions that's perfectly fine, I know exactly where you're coming from. While compliments are great - they're not going to help the story get better (I'm not saying your story needs work... I just understand where you're coming from... But expect me to work a compliment into the constructive criticism somehow hehe) 

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YuffieProductio...
10 months ago

Thank you! Much appreciated. :)

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YuffieProductio...
10 months ago

I was watching Burn Notice last night when the idea hit me. :) Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked it.

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YuffieProductio...
11 months ago

@ElizaSophia Thank you! Hopefully I'll come up with something soon.

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ElizaSophia
11 months ago

@YuffieProductions that's alright, I know the feeling when you just can't think of something ... it sucks :( but the last two chapters were amazing so I'm sure people can suck it up (including me) and wait until you're ready ;D good luck

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YuffieProductio...
11 months ago

Thank you for the comment! I honestly have NO idea what's going to happen in the next chapter.... I know what happens on Darren's side, but not Annie's side yet. :( So not sure when I'll chug out another update. 

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YuffieProductio...
11 months ago

Aw, thank you for the comment! It was lovely. :)

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