Status: OK SO I REALLY NEED SOME HELP ON MY STORY, ITS AN ADVENTURE STROY ABOUT A TEENAGE GIRL AND SOME FAMILY SECRETS! NOT SO EXCITING AND ORIGINAL (1 week ago)
| Name | Elisabeth Bent |
| Location | Michigan |
| Birthday | Oct 12 |
| Member Since | Mar 06, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 1 |
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I'm a tenth;) grader. I love soccer, my best friend <3 and art. I would like to make new friends. I'm easy going and funny. I'm not judgemental and I take advice seriously. I'm a bit out there, and different from what people are used to. But I rock at different :) And now I'm kinda done...
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 | GOOD GIRLOakley finds herself an opportunity to make a new life for herself, a new life away from her controlling mother. Oakley learns that making new friends is easy and losing respect... read more 6 reads  1  0 |
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ElisabethBent
1 week ago
HEYYYYYYY so I'm just trying to get a few reads on my new story, I usually just read story's but for some odd reason i decided to write my own story.... Any way please just read a chapter or two, there are three chapters so far and almost a fourth before i get to deep in anything I really want some opinions! so please help me out here! http://www.wattpad.com/16544748-good-girl#.UYrp3Mu9KSM LittleBit
ExplorersAppren...
6 months ago
Hi there! :)) Just dropping by to tell you that BTS is now updated! :))) I hope you like it! Please tell me what you think about it by giving me comment and also don't forget to vote! :)) Thaaank You! :))
JohnOppus
8 months ago
Hello Elisabeth. I just wanted you to know that a new chapter of my story. Hope you like it
ExplorersAppren...
8 months ago
Hi there Elisabeth! :)) BTS is now updated! If you have time, please check it out! i hope you like it! Thank you very much!
ExplorersAppren...
8 months ago
@ElisabethBent Thank you for adding my story to your "Library" :)) It really means a lot to me. HAHA! just realized :)) thank you!
ExplorersAppren...
8 months ago
@ElisabethBent no, its alright! :))) but anyways, thank you very much I really appreciate it :))
ElisabethBent
8 months ago
@RoxaneBreaux I WOULD LOVE ALL THE HELP I CAN GET!!! haha thanks for offering just inbox me what ever suggestions or whatever you are willing to offer
ElisabethBent
8 months ago
@ExplorersApprentice im going to your story right now, so sorry about the lateness, ive had a busy day...
ExplorersAppren...
8 months ago
Hi! :))) Mind checking out my story? Its my very first ever story here http://www.wattpad.com/story/1826612-behind-the-shadows Its under Teen Fiction and Romance :)) I would appreciate if you can. It really means a lot to me :)) Thank you!
ElisabethBent
8 months ago
oh yes.... my website is www.littlebitme.weebly.com i cant believe i forgot to write that
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great so far. in the beginning you put in detail as always but its a bit boring detail. Like you didn't need to say how she showered but you could...The Lupus
Again, its LONGGGGG. some say its good to have long chapters but you have so much detail and things that you could split this into two. and when...
The Lupus
wayyyy long for a chapter, id split it into two. I think you have the right idea but maybe add more exciting things and less "over the counter"....
The Lupus
this is so awesome so far, you pulled me in and i haven't started from the begging. You are great at descriptions and your character is pretty cool.
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