Duke_Benjy

Name Ben Dunne
Location England
Birthday Sep 08
Member Since Dec 02, 2009
Votes Received 40
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I rely on criticism to further my writing technique.
Any suggestions for my works, please do suggest.
I'd appreciate it.

Apart from that, I'm 16, and I've a passion for writing.

I hate bandwagons with an arduous flame of indescribable abhorrence.
I hate badly written sentences/paragraphs, badly applied punctuation (or lack of), and tediously childish works. Anything that is well written, well punctuated, and overall a great read, I'll like, which will prompt me to vote and/or comment. Anything that is unsatisfactory to my tastes or general English 'standards' will be commented with supportive and constructive criticism, because I believe everything, no matter how terrible, has the capability to be better.
The most talented Captain can not sail the seven seas if he does not have an adequate sea-faring ship. In the same way, an incredible writer may not produce such capable incredible works without a good knowledge and application of proper and coherant English grammar.

Works

Poetry

Poetry

27 parts / 5 pages, updated Apr 10, 2010PG
5,142 reads votes 23 comments 13
Prose

Prose

10 parts / 14 pages, updated Mar 26, 2010PG
4,788 reads votes 14 comments 19
The Memoirs of a Teen

The Memoirs of a Teen

4 parts / 5 pages, updated Dec 08, 2009PG
1,126 reads votes 3 comments 2
W.A.R.

W.A.R.

5 parts / 8 pages, updated Dec 06, 2009PG-13
525 reads votes 0 comments 0

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This was hard to read.
WHY ME??