| Name | Ben Dunne |
| Location | England |
| Birthday | Sep 08 |
| Member Since | Dec 02, 2009 |
| Votes Received | 38 |
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I rely on criticism to further my writing technique. Any suggestions for my works, please do suggest. I'd appreciate it. Apart from that, I'm 16, and I've a passion for writing. I hate bandwagons with an arduous flame of indescribable abhorrence. I hate badly written sentences/paragraphs, badly applied punctuation (or lack of), and tediously childish works. Anything that is well written, well punctuated, and overall a great read, I'll like, which will prompt me to vote and/or comment. Anything that is unsatisfactory to my tastes or general English 'standards' will be commented with supportive and constructive criticism, because I believe everything, no matter how terrible, has the capability to be better. The most talented Captain can not sail the seven seas if he does not have an adequate sea-faring ship. In the same way, an incredible writer may not produce such capable incredible works without a good knowledge and application of proper and coherant English grammar.
Works
 | Poetry27 parts / 5 pages, updated Apr 10, 2010  4,925 reads  23  13 |
 | Prose10 parts / 14 pages, updated Mar 26, 2010 4,635 reads 12 19 |
 | The Memoirs of a Teen4 parts / 5 pages, updated Dec 08, 2009 1,105 reads 3 2 |
 | W.A.R.5 parts / 8 pages, updated Dec 06, 2009  494 reads 0 0 |
Message Board
Ari3ll3
2 years ago
OMFG another boy!!!! -faints and dies- Dude I rarely see guys in this site 0.o Lololololol
CupCakes148
2 years ago
Soo, I finished my story! You should be proud! :) If it weren't for you, i probably would have never started writng, so i thank you soo much! You dont get on much...so i guess thats it... bye :)
gabiejoy10711
3 years ago
Hey! well i was thinking...if you'd like to read my story "Gerovia" a fantasy or legend.. :) well i would be gladly appreciated if you commented or vote cause it means a lot to me! if you want il do the favor in return to read yours too. :) and Pls. take your time ro read gerovia. :] :] thank you! xxgabiexx :)
graceluck
3 years ago
Hii (K) I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women. I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all. Thanks ;) d4l xxxx
mzbkswagga
3 years ago
i would love if yu read my stories, and i'll do da fava back thankz
oiram13
3 years ago
hey man.. will you read my story too? Intentions.... just visit my profile..! cause i'll be glad if you will..! thanks in advance.. don't forget to leave your comment/message or vote or become a fan if you want..! thanks again...!
Mahrii
3 years ago
Hello, i hope this doesnt seem rude. But im wondering what made you decide to become my fan? (Which im very thankful for by the way) I was wondering this because my over all english skills and quite weak, i feel i just have decent idea's and you seem to be one who is interested in things being written propperly.
Duke_Benjy
3 years ago
@Soul4148: I've read your work, it's quite deep. Write some more, much more, I want to see your true colours Dan ;D
Soul4148
3 years ago
wanted to let my number 1 fan know that i have new uploads as well as a updated profile
Fashion_baller2...
3 years ago
heyyy i wanted to thnk you fo ur constructive criticism :)
