I'm new to writing, so I would appreciate criticism. Especially from any writing connoisseurs. I hope you enjoy my work despite any faults. I'm not antisocial...I prefer the term introverted. I'm not unnatural...just eccentric. I'm not mental...merely ill-tempered at times. I'm not uptight...only meticulous. I'm not nerdy...well... I feel compelled to write something good-no- something excellent. I wish to write something moving and inspirational, yet with every tale such as this comes a grim occurrence, a dark interior. Such a Stygian time shapes an entity to grow gradually better as time passes. Bereavement may help us grow- or degrade us into nothing. Suffering may fortify a weak spirit into something better- or destroy any vivacity that may have once existed within it. Whatever may come is ours to choose I believe. And the telling of such an occurrence is what shapes the synopsis of a truly moving story...
![]() | Disingenuous |
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![]() | Hiding |
![]() | People Change |
![]() | Speak your Written Words |
![]() | Echoes of Thought |
![]() | Knocking Tree |
![]() | The Cold of Winter |
![]() | Logic |
![]() | The Journal |
visit my page to read my work? ;)
@seasofme no problem. I enjoyed your poetry
Thanks for following and for liking my poem...:)
@Wordsaremusic Hello FUAVNS WDD Falling's awesome. You'll get a lot of positive feedback for it. Sami already told me which poem I should send, but I'd like your advice, too.
HELLO YOU FAC. I haven't finished reading your poems yet, but if you want to go ahead and send one, I'd do the one with the most votes/reads/comments. I'm going to send Falling because you said I should and it has the most reads/votes/comments. I'll finish reading them tomorrow. Yawnnnn see you later
@seasofme No problem; I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for your likes and commentary :)
@DiverseFiction, thanks for liking my poem! :))
@Meli327 you're welcome and thank you too for the vote and feedback :)
Thanks for liking my poem Books and my book The Tower!
@knightwriter you're welcome; you're an excellent writer :)