Status: Woo! We're moving along, ladies and gentleman. (2 months ago)

Dinoshawr

Location Off In Neverland
Member Since Aug 06, 2011
Profile Page

"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius, and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring." - Marilyn Monroe

"Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down." - Robert Frost

"For me, writing a novel is like having a dream. Writing a novel lets me intentionally dream while I'm still awake. I can continue yesterday's dream today, something you can't normally do in everyday life." - Haruki Murakami

Message Board

Login or Facebook Sign in with Twitter

Dedications

Come Back to Life After SuicideNewbornBooks From The Unknown: Interviews

Recent Votes

Begin AgainInjection [Watty Awards 2012]Demon's BaneThe Heart of a Wildflower (Completed)

Recent Comments

@laylabaybee You're welcome! :) I'm really glad that I could help and I can't wait to see you're writing improve.
Begin Again

WRITING QUALITY: It was okay, but I can see you're potential. I think that with some experience you will have much higher writing quality. The...
Begin Again

Kay, so I'm just gonna give a full review here. DIALOGUE: So the dialogue itself is fine, but its sort of the format that is a little off. It's...
Begin Again

Overall there is a ton to work on. I guess considering this is your first chapter there was probably growth through the story but I think that...
Deadly Beauty (Paranormal F...

I couldn't make it through this chapter. There were quiet a few things that I think really need some attention. First, your spacing. The...
Deadly Beauty (Paranormal F...