DeliriousMoon

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Always loved reading so it was only natural that I'd eventually discover story telling. My favorite genres are drama, comedy, and romance when it's not stupid. I happen to love tragic endings and don't understand why they aren't more popular. Why are people so turned off by unhappy endings?

That might be because if asked, I'd call myself a drama writer. I'm all about the characters and what they feel and who they are. With the exception of my short stories, I spend a lot of time on them.

My Writing Process:

After extensive research on the topic and outlining I start writing. I write the chapter first. Go back and rewrite, then rewrite one last time. Then I edit, making sure all the sentences flow together properly and that I've hit all the major plot points I wanted to cover in the chapter. Then I edit spelling and grammar. I make sure I have as few mistakes as possible. Then I read over it one last time. And just when I think my eyeballs will explode if I read it one more time, I publish. Then I go to chapter two.

And even still, mistakes slip by me. So if you see one, go ahead and call me on it. I appreciate the story being read by a fresh pair of eyes. Just be kind, I'm a delicate soul.

Works

Look but Don't Choke

Look but Don't Choke

9 parts / 35 pages, updated Apr 03, 2013PG-13
After Evie Harper spends the day pining after her unrequited childhood crush, Harley, she drowns her sorrows in a bottle of stolen wine. But the next day, and one g... read more
1,644 reads votes 74 comments 36
More Poison in Your Coffee?

More Poison in Your Coffee?

24 parts / 56 pages, updated Jan 13, 2012PG-13PicturesCompleted
Evelyn’s day couldn't get any worse, until a local news anchor drops dead in her café. If that weren’t bad enough the police suspect her former drug dealing cous... read more
16,384 reads votes 292 comments 89
The Secret Admirer

The Secret Admirer

5 pages, updated Jul 27, 2011PG-13Completed
When Susan receives a dozen white orchids she's pleased that someone would send her gifts. But as the presents get more and more odd, Susan begins to wonder if the myste... read more
594 reads votes 15 comments 12

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ShaniciaMoore
ShaniciaMoore

1 day ago
Have u forgotten about this book I hope not bc I look this story and I can't wait to see what happens next don't let your fans .
ShaniciaMoore
ShaniciaMoore

3 weeks ago
I love your books the evie harper mysteries are the best u should kept writing sequels and start a book series. Your a great author and I'm your biggest fan. I can't wait to read more of your books in the future. Please update soon look but don't choke bc I can't wait to start reading it again
Naturalkmd08
Naturalkmd08

1 month ago
Was watching a movie last night where a guy was in a strip club and they had a 'Do Not Strangle the Dancers' sign up. Made me think of your book and LOL
DeliriousMoon
DeliriousMoon

1 month ago
@JaneSilver16 Actually I looked that up ahead of time and though there is some disagreement, most agree that the words capitalized in a title should be first and last words, nouns, verbs, adjectives, conjunctions and prepositions four letters or more. Words like: and, as, in, the, and but should not be capitalized unless they are the first or last word. ex: The Young and the Restless
freakaccident_
freakaccident_

2 months ago
Shouldn't "but" in your story "Look but Don't Choke" be capitalized? I'm probably wrong, but just asking. :)
DeliriousMoon
DeliriousMoon

2 months ago
@GordanaLam While the main character in Look but Don't Choke is in an interracial relationship, I don't write or bring attention to it. I like to play the racial stuff a lot more subtle. So no, there are no plans for a major story arc focusing on the struggles of dating a person of another race. Instead I choose to portray it as simply existing.
GordanaLam
GordanaLam

2 months ago
@DeliriousMoon hi I was wondering if you wrote any interracial novels?? if you don't, that Is totally fine I've just begun reading your work ... and already I'm amazed ! hahaha I got all that from reading the first page of look but don't choke 
dipsyz
dipsyz

5 months ago
I will start reading, just need to.refresh myself with book.one!
dipsyz
dipsyz

5 months ago
YOU STARTED THE SEQUEL! YES!
DeliriousMoon
DeliriousMoon

8 months ago
@AbiiTastic Yeah, I didn't want you (or other readers) to worry about that. I haven't bumped Evie's book down. I just put the other one on temporary hold. Evie's book is my #1 priority. I'm actually writing a couple pages right this second.

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@ShaniciaMoore Thank you and sorry for the slow update.
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@Astrolabe Thank you. And don't worry so much about the votes. It's all good.
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@Viviloana That's a great compliment as I've read and am familiar with both of those series. I can't hope to be as good as them yet, espeically...
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