Status: just some unprofessional writing tips xo (4 months ago)


Name Alice Accardii
Location Australia
Birthday Feb 20
Member Since Sep 11, 2012
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Hey all, thanks for visiting my page!! So happy you took the time to do it! If all this writing looks boring, please just skip to any of my stories down the bottom of my page an I'll love you for it c;
Ok, so I haven't updated the Ravenstorm Mansion in almost a year, but I am happy to say I am trying to start posting again. Unfortunately I lost my laptop which to me was like losing the most valuable possession I had, it broke, I died a little inside :'c  But anyways, I have almost all of the three books written now, just have the last few chapters of book three outlined but need to write them in detail.
Feedback is EXTREMELY appreciated as the reason I joined Wattpad was to try an grow as a writer as being published is my impossible dream for life. So please feel free to leave feedback, positive or negative, any suggestions are very welcome. Hope you enjoy my stories an hopefully it's not a total waste of time to read them xoxo


My, VERY UNPROFESSIONAL, writing tips xoxo

My, VERY UNPROFESSIONAL, writing tips xoxo

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The Ravenstorm Mansion- Book 1

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The Escape. - short story.

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