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Debbie_e

Name	Debbie
Location	England
Member Since	Mar 19, 2012
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Thank you for wandering on to my profile page. I hope you stick around for a while.

I’m an avid reader and enthusiastic writer. Any comments on my work is gratefully received, and the favour is returned (albeit on a like for like basis in terms of length, content etc.). 

I wont be posting much though as I'm revising the first draft of an older novel.  I'm still happy to critique the work of others though. If you want a critique/comment either leave one for what I've posted already (as above) or message me. If I can I'll do at least one chapter. If I like what you've posted I'll keep going. 

As well as twitter and the blog above I can also be found at Good Reads (Debbie_e), Wordpress (http://thewickedqueensmirror.wordpress.com) and Fictionpress (Tawny Owl) for a taste of my older works.

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The Dark Side of the Fruit

1 page, updated Aug 12, 2012

Snow White looks in to her stepmother's mirror

8 reads

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The Sworn Bond

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Debbie_e
5 months ago

I never really thought of it as a romance. Guess there are elements though. Thanks for letting me know.

natmarie
5 months ago

Night cafe is featured on ADOR :) exciting!

natmarie
7 months ago

You are awesome! Thanks so much. :)

Debbie_e
8 months ago

You're welcome. I may post some of gothic, but not yet. I'll message you when I do.

natmarie
8 months ago

@Debbie_e Aww, thanks. That makes total sense. I know I need to edit it way more than I have in its posted form. I've been trying to iron out and fix some of the plot holes and the other things (which you are so awesome at pointing out in all your comments) get over looked. Looks like i will be stock piling your feedback once more for when I have more time to edit. You rock. :) Ps...post Gothic?

Debbie_e
8 months ago

You don't suck at third person. Just don't head jump. I dunno, stay in Chase's head until he starts talking to Avery and then have a page break or something and stay in Avery's head?
Or try and do third person omniscent rather than third person limited. If you crack that let me know. I've tried and I just can't manage it at all.

natmarie
8 months ago

@Debbie_e Hooray for Gothic and it's life taking over abilities. I LOVE that one. So much. Thanks for the honest feedback, you are so right. I have a bunch of your lovley comments from fpress saved I just haven't had the time to properly edit yet. I thought I'd offer up my half-edited version. You make great points. The PoV thing for one...well that's why I SUCK at 3rd person. But I thought I'd try. haha.

Debbie_e
8 months ago

That's so cool. Thankyou for the dedication.  I love that story and will leave a comment as soon as I've made some headway with Gothic (It's taking over my life, I swear)
Thnks for the review as well.

natmarie
8 months ago

Sorry for all the putting up things and taking them down. You know I'm ADD like that. Just wanted to let you know that you and the rainy day today inspired me to work on editing WALS. It's back up and as soon as the site lets me it is dedicated to you :)

natmarie
9 months ago

Thanks so much for the feedback. It is always so helpful. Let me know if I can help with your cover woes :) I promise to look at Eternal soon.

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