Status: Takes time, never give up. (2 months ago)

DavidOcampo

Name David Ocampo
Location Las Vegas
Birthday Apr 06
Member Since Aug 01, 2012
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I hope to add a lot of stories and provide you readers with excitement with each word. I will try to add different types of writings and improve my writing here so I may one day be able to professionally publish my novels. Until then I wish you can all support me if you like any of my ideas and I will continue to expand on them accordingly. Thank you very much

Works

Animus

Animus

2 pages, updated Mar 14, 2013PG-13
2 reads votes 0 comments 0
Legend of the Wayseers

Legend of the Wayseers

4 pages, updated Jan 31, 2013PG-13
12 reads votes 1 comments 1
Behemoth

Behemoth

3 pages, updated Jan 29, 2013PG-13Completed
A slasher-short that puts the reader straight into the action as Chris and Dylan try their best to survive the heavy assaults of the Behemoth.
19 reads votes 1 comments 4
The Genesis Code

The Genesis Code

3 parts / 10 pages, updated Nov 15, 2012PG-13
What started out as a hunt for the popular QR stickers quickly escalated for Arthur Eld when he finds himself enlisted in the "G.Game." Run by the mysterious J,... read more
296 reads votes 34 comments 38
Revered Infirmary

Revered Infirmary

3 pages, updated Oct 14, 2012PG-13
Revered Infirmary, a famous hospital built many years ago, did not always have the best intentions for its patients. Now the souls of the deceased have come back to trap... read more
38 reads votes 3 comments 4
Leeches

Leeches

4 pages, updated Oct 13, 2012PG-13
The world is under attack. Leeches have been spotted traveling through the pipes and feeding on innocent people. Now the lives of four strangers are crossing at different intersec... read more
32 reads votes 4 comments 2
Psych Slash

Psych Slash

3 pages, updated Sep 16, 2012PG-13
In a world dominated by Psych Users, those with special abilities, a former prince is a journey with his close friend to try and restore his kingdom back to it's glory. Meetin... read more
121 reads votes 18 comments 20
The Ferryman's Token

The Ferryman's Token

6 pages, updated Sep 16, 2012PG-13Completed
Returning home in a bus, four strangers are cast into a strange dimension when several strange deaths occur within the group. To survive the horrifying nightmare, t... read more
108 reads votes 10 comments 13
Crystallized  (Short)

Crystallized (Short)

2 pages, updated Aug 01, 2012PG-13
When a series of strange murders plague a small peaceful town, Detective Mark Bolt is called to investigate the crimes, but does he have the guts to finish the job when... read more
128 reads votes 11 comments 16

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DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

2 months ago
Super short story that I worked on during my other works. Check it out!
DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

3 months ago
Check out my new story! I just wrote it for a contest, please tell me what you think! http://www.wattpad.com/11736691-legend-of-the-wayseers
DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

3 months ago
@Atolycus Hey, sorry I've been kind of out of it. Are you still up to the task?
DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

3 months ago
Check out my new short for a contest!
http://www.wattpad.com/11650580-behemoth
Let me know what you think!
DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

3 months ago
Hey everyone! I'm sorry I've been gone for such a long time. Stories that I might share later, but for right now I feel like I have to force myself to get back into writing. I have a few more stories that I want to post and I can't wait to hear from you all. It is time to get serious and start working hard again! We Can Do It!
Atolycus
Atolycus

5 months ago
Man, you have a lot of stuff up. I would suggest getting covers, especially so you can differentiate your works. I look forward to giving your stuff a peruse, but it might have to wait until winter break. 

Is there anything you recommend I prioritize?
JoannaBock
JoannaBock

5 months ago
your welcome I'm glad you took an open mind and didnt just call me a bully I hate that 
he writes an intresting series of terminator fan fic which is why i orginally picked him up (Addict) but dies the fire which became a series is brilliant 
your writing is amazing and I think to not devolop it would be a waste good luck 
DavidOcampo
DavidOcampo

5 months ago
Y@JoannaBock Thank you for being honest. At first I wanted to wait and show the start of all my stories, but I have too many ideas so I have to start writing them down. I'm tired of waiting for people to come find me, so now I'll have a show ready for them :)
I am going to start to updating them all soon so I don't lose my place. 
He sounds interesting I'll check him out!
Thank you again
JoannaBock
JoannaBock

5 months ago
reading though some on these peices I wouldnt be surprised if you enjoy an author called S M Stirling 
He writes sci fi but with a twist 
JoannaBock
JoannaBock

5 months ago
I love the look of the stories you write yet I have one critquical peice of advice Update them hell I want to read them but I hate waiting for the turn of the decade to finsh a book if it ever makes it at all I will add them to my reading lists but argh please your imagination seems amazing dont waste it with the 'I cant be asked' excuse give me an excuse to read every single book here 
By the way I found you in the critque club so i figured you can take this. dont get all mad at me take the advice if your profile is anything to go on and you want to publish your works write them dont wait for someones approvol before you write something you believe in

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Thank you for the words of encouragement! I'll look into the book cover.@jetaime26
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