Sorry, I didn't comment on every chapter I was too busy with reading. I think you've done a excellent start to this piece, great visuals, awesome writing. Well done. I really loved ILF, d I think you've given it new life.
Hi my name is Natanaele Micalii, but most people call me Nate. I love writing poetry, and according to my friends, my poems are really good. So i was press-ganged on here. Personally i don't think they're as fantastic as people describe them, but check them out and let me know. I hope you enjoy them as much as my friends do, i'll upload from time to time, or most likely when i'm in the mood. Personal Info: I live in a family of 4, my parents, my brother and i. I live in Australia, of course And i've ran out of things to say but when i remember something i'll post it up
Location:In bed, making poetry
Joined:3 years ago
Great use of visuals for every chapter, LMH
You write really great sex scenes.....It really concerns me what inspires you...or who...