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DamienRants
1 year ago
Err,@AngeliqueAngel , I read a book called The Road, at the beginning of last year, and it totally changed my outlook on books and how prose could be written, it is an incredible read. Then I moved on to Hemingway and read most of his works. I don't know about realism so much, some of my stories are pretty far fetched. But, I really don't like thrillers or crime fiction, so maybe that's why? Plus it fits my style. I write very slowly, so I concentrate on each sentence, and re write it at least five times, so that probably causes it to come out that way. So, yeah a bit of both, other writers have shown me what you can do, and I've just worked with that. Rambly.
AnnaDawson
1 year ago
Ha, thanks for your comment! I really appreciated it because it's something I've realized for a long time! Especially in the earlier chapters of this story, it has some things I actually don't like about it and may change in an edited version. But I hope you found in the latter chapters, it starts to get a little more realistic. Thanks for the support!
DamienRants
1 year ago
@PoetryInMotion Okay, I will have a look over that too. Sorry. I'm so busy at the moment. I'll get to it on Monday fo sho.
DamienRants
1 year ago
@Diamondsinthegrass I'll have a look at it tomorrow. I'm sure it'll be good.
Diamondsinthegr...
1 year ago
I took a look at your newest writing, and thought you had a really nice way of writing. I was wondering if you could take a look at my "Stay Out of Hell" and help me improve. Thanks :D
Cloverism
1 year ago
Hey I commented and voted for you short story, I liked it very much! Please read and check out my stories. Thanks :)
DamienRants
2 years ago
@showstopper95 Anytime.
lulurofl
2 years ago
Hey there :) Check my story, Falling in Paris please? Thank you :)
scorpians
2 years ago
Thanks for the critique on my story, I really appreciate it :)
