Err,@AngeliqueAngel , I read a book called The Road, at the beginning of last year, and it totally changed my outlook on books and how prose could be written, it is an incredible read. Then I moved on to Hemingway and read most of his works. I don't know about realism so much, some of my stories are pretty far fetched. But, I really don't like thrillers or crime fiction, so maybe that's why? Plus it fits my style. I write very slowly, so I concentrate on each sentence, and re write it at least five times, so that probably causes it to come out that way. So, yeah a bit of both, other writers have shown me what you can do, and I've just worked with that.
Is ur profile pic a pic of u? Just curious.
Ha, thanks for your comment! I really appreciated it because it's something I've realized for a long time! Especially in the earlier chapters of this story, it has some things I actually don't like about it and may change in an edited version. But I hope you found in the latter chapters, it starts to get a little more realistic.
Thanks for the support!
@PoetryInMotion Okay, I will have a look over that too. Sorry. I'm so busy at the moment. I'll get to it on Monday fo sho.