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The Pleasures of Summer has gone in at #1 in the iTunes market and at #9 in the paperback charts.

I'm half of Evie Hunter, the infamous duo who has writen The Pleasures of Winter, A Touch of Winter, The Pleasures of Summer, A Touch of Summer and Angels, Demons and Doms. 

The Pleasures of Winter has sold over 50,000 copies so far, and we are hoping that Summer will do much, much better.
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Writing the perfect query/cover letter

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Ctyolene commented on Writing Character Descriptions.


Ctyolene
You don't need long detailed physical descriptions. Sometimes actions  can reveal something like height (touching the top of the door as she walks through) or weight (struggling to zip up the pair of size 16 jeans). In general, something like hair or eye colour make no real difference in the story, so you can leave that up to the reader.

If you were telling someone about a friend, would you say, "You'll like her, she's got blonde hair and blue eyes and is 5'6". Or would you say, "You'll love her, she can keep a straight face while telling really filthy jokes"?