@Serenity_Wolf78 Then what's the problem? She has just done something which will change both their lives.
The Pleasures of Summer has gone in at #1 in the iTunes market and at #9 in the paperback charts. I'm half of Evie Hunter, the infamous duo who has writen The Pleasures of Winter, A Touch of Winter, The Pleasures of Summer, A Touch of Summer and Angels, Demons and Doms. The Pleasures of Winter has sold over 50,000 copies so far, and we are hoping that Summer will do much, much better.
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Action doesn't have to mean guns blazing. In this scene she walks into the house of a stranger and tells him to control his children and get married. How do you think he will react? No matter what he does, something has changed dramatically.
HGH2: Hate Never Dies
It could work for a children's book. Why is the Toaad saying this?
You can do anything if you do it well enough. You can write a novel from the point of view of the family dog, if you can pull it off. But there are fashions in writing as in everything else, and the modern trend is of a small number of points of view, tightly controlled so that the reader lives inside the head of that character.
I can recommend a good editor. She has done work for people here, plus other writers, so you can check her out. She is not too expensive, and charges on a sliding scale, so the better shape your MS is in, the less she will charge. PM me for details. Even for professional writers, you need an editor.
@ammelockheart Not a good idea. You miss too many of your own mistakes. I can recommend a good editor.
Depends how it's done, but if a boy is running through a forest, away from a monster, you have plenty to write about without getting into backstory.
Parogar is still alive, mostly due to the good influence of Maja.
<.< Last night was fun. :)