@stenchouse do you think I should take out the intro to not foist too much onto the reader?
I really like it so far and will read the remainder soon
Aw thanks. I'll check it out now.
@stenchouse Let me know what you think about Planetary Domination. I thought about doing a full and total rewrite on it. I have the whole story posted. If you want to read but you don't have to. You seem like a good writer.