hello i would like to say that i love your story. The way you write it is wonderful and i was just really hoping you could post more really soon i dont wont you to hurry it but i would love to fine out whats going to happen and i also hope she doesnt get her heart broken.. please keep her and jake togetter please.... OH and when i started reading the story without looking at your profile i thought you where from Australia with some of the words you used.
Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time, can you please read a story of mine? Here’s three that I need some criticism on:
"A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor
Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell.
"Never Meant To Be" romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be.
"Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural
Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two?
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Heyy!! If You get the chance would you mind checking out my stories?
He's Cocky, Hes' Mean, He's My Pet Panther;
Clarke, used to be a normal teenager, or so she thought, until she got involved with some sex deprived boys who turn into panthers when they got "excited"!
Before Autumn:
Autumn has taken the responsibility of being the heir of the most powerful kingdom in the known world ever since her brother died. Now reaching the age of 16, she's about to get married off along with her 2 sisters, her youngest sister who suffers from a unstable ability to read minds is getting married to a power hunger, cocky manipulator of a prince, Gaven. She's determined to get rid of Gaven before he can do harm, but what happens when she wounds up falling for him herself?!
An Idiot's Guide to Love:
Him: A cocky, arrogant, pessimistic jock who has dated almost all the girls from New York to California.
Her: A girl who has her nose in everyone's business, she's loud mouth, tough- never been in a relationship before,and- a fresh fish in a sea of sharks.
They: Wound up as partners for a assignment assigned by a bizarre teacher!
Wait For Me:
"Wait For Me" Jemmy whispers to Kris. Eight years later without him, she tries to fit in at her high school, with the rich girls and the jocks. Spring dance comes up, though Kris can't seem to let go of Jemmy she is offered to go out with Chris, the popular Jock. After seeing a figure in her dreams, and a drop of blood on her pillow Kris is sent to therapy, where she meets a 16 year old therapist Rey Stane. Suddenly entering her life Rey and his secretary Luna enter Kris's high school, what will her boyfriend, Chris think? And whats the truth behind Jemmy?
House of Gods: Daughter of Death summary:
Rhea has always been the sarcastic mature "emo" girl, one faithful day when her best friend leaves her and she undergoes another moment of humiliation, overwhelmed with anger that she had kept inside her for years, Rhea unconsciously ends up killing all her classmates and is acquainted with someone who calls himself "Death."
hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
"All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
Synopsis:
Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls
Heyy,
Not meaning to be a pain or anything :s Lol.
I was just wondering if you could read my story
Musical Seduction.
It would be soo much appreciated.
btw L-o-v-e the proff pic. [;
Thanks' a mill.
x cedes.
Hey! I was wondering if you would check out a few of my stories or a piece of poetry; if you have time. If you enjoy it maybe become a fan. Comment on your opinion tho. because I would love to hear it. It would mean a lot to me. Thanks!