Status: I am on a writing roll. Four chapters in one week? I do plan on it. (16 hours ago)

CarsonFaircloth

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Alright, ladies and gentlemen. I'm pretty no-nonsense, so I won't ramble on. But:

My first language is English. (I'm currently learning German.)
The Passage is possibly the greatest novel in existence.
I was, and will always be, an inkie.
Don't rush me. I'll get it done when I get it done.
I'm a harsh critic. 
Yes, I will review your work.
Yes, I will turn it away if I want.
Yes, I want a beta reader (eh, or someone who's a dedicated reader...either way!)
No, I'm not sharing too-personal information. Unless I know you already.

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Those searching for a critique:

I am a HARSH critic. And I do mean harsh. If something bothers me, I'm going to say it, and most likely very bluntly. Envision a literary version of Simon Cowell. 

I critique the first page. That's 200-500 words in an actual printed book. I also do technical critiques, where I help with specific problems you're having (a description in this chapter, a plot issue in another, etc.).

I'm pretty busy with writing my own novels, and if I don't have school, I have work, sports, and general life-outside-wattpad, but I will do my best to get back to you quickly if you request I critique your work and I accept. I promise I won't leave you out to dry!

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My works:

Powerless (taken down, currently being edited)

Revolution (latest novel, action/adventure)

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National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) 2012: Success

Camp NaNoWriMo April 2013: not-so-successful 

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Revolution

Revolution

8 parts / 21 pages, updated May 21, 2013PG-13
The United States of America is not loved, feared, or respected. It’s the year 2023, and the world’s power has shifted: Russia now rules with an iron fist, their military unmat... read more
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So, Revolution has been updated. PLEASE read chapter five again, it is completely new - not just edited. If you want to understand chapter six, you should read five. So really, it's like two chapters in one update. Whoo!

Let me know how you guys are liking it! Thanks for reading!
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

3 days ago
Revolution has been updated, by the way. I didn't want to cheat and skip a day, BUT, be warned: Chapter Five will probably be completely changed. I wasn't happy with it, but don't worry. When I update next, there will be two chapters - a new five and a completely new six. 

Thanks for reading!
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

1 week ago
@ItalieMalie

It kinda does look like trains, doesn't it? XD But I have too. I'm excited to see it again. 
ItalieMalie
ItalieMalie

1 week ago
omg I thought that said trains! 

but yeah, I'm really excited and pumped too! I missed Adam a lot. uwu
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

1 week ago
In case you didn't notice, I updated Revolution, which is now at four chapters. As always, your support is more than welcome, and I look forward to writing this with you all.
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

1 week ago
@I_Byte 

That's alright - I usually like to do covers before stories are posted, anyway. It's easier. ^_^ What did you have in mind for cover ideas?
I_Byte
I_Byte

2 weeks ago
@CarsonFaircloth Haha Thanks! Its actually not posted yet... 
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

2 weeks ago
@I_Byte 

Of course! I'd be more than happy to help out. What story do you need a cover for?
I_Byte
I_Byte

2 weeks ago
haha Hi! Can I still take you up on that offer with the cover?? :D
CarsonFaircloth
CarsonFaircloth

2 weeks ago
@beth8507 

Haha, nah, I bet your summary is fine. xD But ugh, I really need to work on mine. I always have to slap on something when I first post the story, but now I'm itching to edit it and make it more...alluring? Telling? Either way, hopefully it'll be better my second go.

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