Status: Surprise, surprise. I'm still alive. Just very busy. (6 days ago)

CarsonFaircloth

Location USA
Member Since Feb 27, 2012
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If you request a critique from me, you are accepting that:

I am a harsh critic. 

Your novel may be featured in my novel, KNOCKOUT REVIEWS (though this does not mean your name will be mentioned).

I critique only the first page, unless I love it. 

I require a follow as payment.

You must PM me. I will accept no requests on my message board. And if you PM me, you must include the title of what you want me to critique, otherwise your request will be denied.

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KNOCKOUT REVIEWS: Waiting List

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Please keep in mind: I leave very long, detailed reviews. Each review can and will take a certain amount of time. Your critique will be completed in the order you see above.

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My works:

Falling for Insanity (Private)

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National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) 2012: Success

National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) 2013: Not-so-successful

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Want to know what novels I'm reading? Do you need some advice on writing? Or do you just want to check out some snarky book reviews? See it all here: 

carsonfaircloth.wordpress.com

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Works

Writer's Paradise

Writer's Paradise

4 parts / 3 pages, updated Jul 14, 2014PG
135 reads votes 13 comments 3
KNOCKOUT REVIEWS

KNOCKOUT REVIEWS

18 parts / 8 pages, updated Jun 14, 2014PG-13
Welcome to the Best and Worst of Wattpad, where you can see what works... And what really, really doesn't.
3,061 reads votes 146 comments 84

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