Alright, ladies and gentlemen. I'm pretty no-nonsense, so I won't ramble on. But: My first language is English. (I'm currently learning German.) The Passage is possibly the greatest novel in existence. I was, and will always be, an inkie. Don't rush me. I'll get it done when I get it done. I'm a harsh critic. Yes, I will review your work. Yes, I will turn it away if I want. Yes, I want a beta reader (eh, or someone who's a dedicated reader...either way!) No, I'm not sharing too-personal information. Unless I know you already. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` Those searching for a critique: I am a HARSH critic. And I do mean harsh. If something bothers me, I'm going to say it, and most likely very bluntly. Envision a literary version of Simon Cowell. I critique the first page. That's 200-500 words in an actual printed book. I also do technical critiques, where I help with specific problems you're having (a description in this chapter, a plot issue in another, etc.). I'm pretty busy with writing my own novels, and if I don't have school, I have work, sports, and general life-outside-wattpad, but I will do my best to get back to you quickly if you request I critique your work and I accept. I promise I won't leave you out to dry! ````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` My works: Powerless (taken down, currently being edited) Revolution (latest novel, action/adventure) ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) 2012: Success Camp NaNoWriMo April 2013: not-so-successful ❤ Stalk me and my reviews at: http://carsonfaircloth.tumblr.com/ Follow me on Twitter at: https://twitter.com/LoveMissSarcasm
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So, Revolution has been updated. PLEASE read chapter five again, it is completely new - not just edited. If you want to understand chapter six, you should read five. So really, it's like two chapters in one update. Whoo! Let me know how you guys are liking it! Thanks for reading!
Revolution has been updated, by the way. I didn't want to cheat and skip a day, BUT, be warned: Chapter Five will probably be completely changed. I wasn't happy with it, but don't worry. When I update next, there will be two chapters - a new five and a completely new six. Thanks for reading!
@ItalieMalie It kinda does look like trains, doesn't it? XD But I have too. I'm excited to see it again.
omg I thought that said trains! but yeah, I'm really excited and pumped too! I missed Adam a lot. uwu
In case you didn't notice, I updated Revolution, which is now at four chapters. As always, your support is more than welcome, and I look forward to writing this with you all.
@I_Byte That's alright - I usually like to do covers before stories are posted, anyway. It's easier. ^_^ What did you have in mind for cover ideas?
@CarsonFaircloth Haha Thanks! Its actually not posted yet...
@I_Byte Of course! I'd be more than happy to help out. What story do you need a cover for?
haha Hi! Can I still take you up on that offer with the cover?? :D
@beth8507 Haha, nah, I bet your summary is fine. xD But ugh, I really need to work on mine. I always have to slap on something when I first post the story, but now I'm itching to edit it and make it more...alluring? Telling? Either way, hopefully it'll be better my second go.