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My Child. My Angel.

Social data: 2.1K reads. 69 votes. 53 comments.

Description: Aurora, raped and pregnant at the mere age of sixteen, finds herself living in an orphanage after her foster parents kick her out. She, alone, faces the battles of pregnancy in a place that doesn’t feel like home. Her parents died when she was you...

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Forbidden Love

Forbidden Love

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Bethany and Cayden are twins who are separated at birth because their mom was unstable. Cayden was adopt...

Hey. I would like a critique when you have the time please. The title of my story that I would like critiqued is My Child. My Angel. It is only about six chapters so if you could do at least three that would be great. The summary could use a critique as well. I'm looking for a critique because I know my story isn't flawless and I am hoping that by getting an in depth critique on part of my story will help me fix the other chapters I already and the future chapters that I will write. I will tell you ahead of time that I know for a fact that I have a problem with grammar and tenses when writing. It's something I am trying to fix so I don't mind hearing about it.