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| Name | Anita Simmons Kearney |
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you got off track a few pages ago..continuity in a story is everything...Cry Me A F*cking River, B!t...
You lost me I do not understand why she is mad at Embry nor why she is immune to the alpha voice of command? other than that this is good.
Cry Me A F*cking River, B!t...
have Sam do it...
Cry Me A F*cking River, B!t...
so far you are doing quite well, the emotions of the heroine are about right for the type of abuse she has suffered...I like that you restrain...
Cry Me A F*cking River, B!t...
It was a bit sparse and disjointed, I do not know if that is what you intended, but it definitely intrigued me and I want to know more.
The Alpha's Mark
