In a story I'm writing, I'm having trouble with the character. She basically loses her whole family and I'm not sure how much she should be able to cry or feel bad about it. I don't want her to sound whiny about it but I mean she can't just be inhumanly not upset about the situation. Any help?
*******I AM NO LONGER USING THIS ACCOUNT, MY NEW ACCOUNT IS @Coconutz7 THANK YOU!!!!!************ Hi my name is Andi! I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THE OCEAN AND ANYTHING TROPICAL!!! I HAVE 4 horses 3 dogs 1 goat! He is ADORABLE!! I LOVE Divergent!!! Its the best thing in the history of ever! Skiing Being with my BFFL's Dress shopping! Reading Drawing Swimming Writing! Riding horses (sometimes) I AM CHRISTIAN!! FAVORITE COLORS Blue Lime Green My favorite song is I Need You by M83, I kind of love M83 I'm a junior and 16! I live in the US of A I am lazy as (insert cuss-word here). but yeah, homework sucks. (The previous information was for any stalkers[or Manda] who are creepy like that so please I encourage you to not stalk me even if you are madly in love with me like some people I know[again Manda] Thank you) :) Anyway I will try and work on some new stories, in the mean time... Fan me and stuff, Thanks! XP THANKS FOR READING! PLEASE FAN ME, VOTE, AND COMMENT :D ~Andi~
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Description: Julia is 14 and is going through some hard times. Her father has died and now she and her mother must travel to New York to find a new life. On the way Julia meets Everett, a boy of first class who is 15. HIs mother treats Julia like trash but does...
It's been a while since I've been on but I honestly think I might starting going on here a little more(I'm working something but I don't know how it will turn out) I'm a little excited though! Yeah just wanted to let anyone who is interested know. :)