AlexaFragile

Name Alexa
Location British Columbia, Canada
Birthday Jan 18
Member Since Jul 06, 2012
Votes Received 108
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Hey there! My name is Alexa, and I like green, kittens, and meatloaf. I hate chocolate, 20 and above weather, and cockroaches. I'm trying to grow my hair below my waist, and I'm hoping to get my first tattoo soon. I live and love in good old Canada, and hope to enroll in university next year as a Psychology student, and later graduate with a PhD in Clinical or Developmental Psychology. :)

I also like to write as a past time. This side of me has been neglected as of yet, and in my efforts to be a well rounded young lady, I am going to try and resume doing so. So! Give me a read, give me a critique, and maybe even give me a vote. All is appreciated here. ^^

>>>>>>>>>>Also, I almost always am willing to give out a critique. I WILL NOT, though, be fluffy or lie about something that is not quality work. If your grammar is bad, please, for your own good, fix that before coming to me, or you will be wasting your time.<<<<<<<<<<

If you would like to go digging around in my profile, you can find a few examples of critiques I've posted recently to see how in depth they usually are. I do not believe in sugar coating, and I also believe that it is impossible to objectively look at your own work the way someone else can.

Please, though. If you do not have proper grammar or punctuation, do not ask me to do a critique for you. A few mistakes here and there are okay, but I don't have patience for people who don't even try to make something look professional before posting it online.

Now, of course, there is one catch. I recently posted a new story, 'Shade', on my profile and am looking for some high quality critiques myself, as I know it has some kinks and would like some other eyes to find the ones I cannot. So, if you post a decent critique on the first chapter of Shade, I will gladly do the same on your profile.

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My Critiques

My Critiques

6 parts / 2 pages, updated May 19, 2013G
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17 reads votes 0 comments 0
Shade

Shade

3 pages, updated May 16, 2013PG-13
62 reads votes 6 comments 7
Flight (not to be completed)

Flight (not to be completed)

2 parts / 4 pages, updated Jul 10, 2012PG-13Pictures
Raised in a sheltered estate, Elizabet didn't even know about the war blooming outside her front door. When she is finally pushed to escape the confines of her ... read more
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AlexaFragile
AlexaFragile

1 week ago
@weirdgurll aww, thanks. XD
weirdgurll
weirdgurll

1 week ago
I don't know why you asked me to review your story because you're a magnificent  writer, i'm not even near as good as you are. Hats off to you^^
CrazyChickenEgg
CrazyChickenEgg

1 month ago
Please vote dit boek http://www.wattpad.com/15498943-he-let-me-go-ft-louis-tomlinson-chapter-32 Want ik wil zo graag dat ze door gaat please!?!?!?!
Xxfalling_pressurexX
Xxfalling_press...

6 months ago
I know this is out of the blue, but I was hoping you could review my story Falling in Love With music? It would mean a lot to get an honest review :) I'd be happy to take a look at your story too. Thank you in advance.
AlexaFragile
AlexaFragile

9 months ago
@TommyGirl haha thanks!
TommyGirl
TommyGirl

9 months ago
@AlexaFragile I happened to be about the boards and saw that we are suffering from the same bane and it seems that sad classical music really helps, for me Beethoven really helps especially Moonlight Sonata. Hope you find your muse soon. :)
AlexaFragile
AlexaFragile

9 months ago
@3picCrimxX Thank you. ^^
3picCrimxX
3picCrimxX

9 months ago
your books seem good
AlexaFragile
AlexaFragile

10 months ago
@Paper_Cranes No problem! Can't wait. ^^
Paper_Cranes
Paper_Cranes

10 months ago
Thank you so much for the comment! I will get to reading yours when I'm not so fried. I'm just kinda tired, so my critique wouldn't be as good as my others if I read your work right now. I'll add it to my list. c:

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I really don't know why you wanted me to critique your story, there really isn't anything for me to say! The pace is perfect, you have perfect...
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You have a very strong voice and some good vocab, as well as a good grasp of grammar and the like. This is all the more depressing because the...
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Yup, that prologue was just fine. One thing, though, you mention that all these apprentices are there but they just... stand there and listen to...
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I'm conflicted on this one. I usually hate hate hate prologues, but this is actually very well done and I don't feel like it is going to lesson...
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