hi! I'm Yna and i'm currently writing "Dangerous Prince: The Choice"... i hope you have free time to read it... please leave a comment there (I just want to know what you think about it... and if you liked it) or vote or become a fan...
here are some of the lines from my story...
"But I have said before that i don't like you!" Urgh! The last thing I needed now was a stalker!
"I don't care," she said stubbornly. "I won't give up. I know you'll fall for me in the end."
"What the -" She smiled when she saw the reaction on my face. "I. Will. Never. Fall. For. You."
Analee's smile grew wider. "I can always make you love me."
"What?" I shouted.
She bit her lower lip again, her eyes gleaming with anticipation.
"You are a pathetic little bitch," I said through gritted teeth. Was this demon making fun of me? Was this some kind of a joke for her?
She walked gracefully towards me and before i could even move a muscle, she tip - toed and kissed me on the lips.
Damn! She stole my first kiss! The nerve of this girl!
She moved her face an inch away from me and whispered huskily, "Well, I am the bitch who will make sure that one day you'll kneel before me begging for my affection."
Hi! I was wondering if you could read my story, The Eighth Victim, and tell me what you think about it so far. It’s a work in progress, but I really want to get it on the What’s Hot list! Here’s what it’s going to be about…
Addison Moore is a popular senior in high school, who sometimes treats people with a lot less respect than she should. But that all changes when she receives a mysterious list in her locker titled ‘The Eight People I Hate Most’, and is ranked as #8. For awhile she thinks nothing about it, until her best friend Kaitlyn, the first person on the list, suddenly commits suicide. But was it really suicide? Or was it murder? When more and more people from the list start showing up dead, Addison fears for her life and many others. She finds comfort in a boy whom she thought she hated, and ends up falling a little too deep. This story will hopefully have you on the edge of your seat, and will be romantic, suspenseful, and maybe a bit emotional at times.
I hope you read it!! I would love any criticism you’d have for me! Good or bad, or maybe just some friendly advise would be great! Thanks so much!
hey, could you please check out my new story, Will I Ever Get My Soul Mate?, I'm new to this site and am looking for some comments and criticisms of my writing. I will make sure to vote and comment on your writing!