This Story Creeps Me Out !!
But this is a nice and scary story !! Thumbs up ! :D
That was an awsome story I loved how you put so much detail into it, I felt like I was really there!
Oh. My. Gosh. That. Was. A. Awsome. Story!!!! Very well detailed and no grammer mistakes!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!
I love reading creepy stories.
Seriously, your story gave me a goosebumps.
Very fantastic story. I love scary stories...But it was a bad part for me to read this before going to bed.
its really good some good detail :) the beginning was more scarier :) but loved it <3
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