It's good, but too many POV's clumped together. I suggest you elaborate more, and try to add one POV only to one single chapter. Good luck!
SO fresh and new :) keep up the good work, I can't believe there's people like that in this world though.
GOOD WORK DANGALANG. Hopefully, Hannah will flourish and show her true colors. Maybe she would sooner result as a faggot fatty ! WHO KNOWS. Uhhmmmm.
Ooh I really love this idea! Maybe a few grammatical errors...but the idea is pure! That barista lady really had it coming!!
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