Cut Down to Size

Working in the modelling industry is real work. Poise, confidence, beauty, you need to have it all. The long hours, keeping up the smile, holding the position, it is not something that Hannah ever wants to get into. Having a mother that owns America’s Most Famous Model Magazine so she HAS to keep up that smile. Having to keep up the image has made everything harder for her. She is a family letdown, a disgrace to the Kingston name. A fat, ugly, talentless loser with self-esteem to match, she has finally decided it’s time to change it up. Going to the gym doesn’t help. Hiring a personal fitness coach doesn’t help. Starving herself definitely doesn’t help. In the end, all she wants is her one true love; food and the way it makes her feel. She binges immediately after a workout, putting more unnecessary pounds than she needs. Already 60 pounds overweight, she can’t show her face without getting laughed at. Wellington Boarding School for Gifted Athletes. Only 1,283 miles from where she’s from in New York, she goes to this prestigious school in Miami in order to start a new life, get a fresh start, lose weight, and rebuild her confidence. In one senior year, she hopes to get all this done and more. In a matter of minutes, she was able to fool everyone in the school. Disguising who she was, she was able to fit in perfectly… dressed like a guy. For a school full of guys.
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This is really interesting!  :)  I agree with TigerBee though about the POV's. But otherwise, good job! I'll read on when I can :)
It's good, but too many POV's clumped together. I suggest you elaborate more, and try to add one POV only to one single chapter.

Good luck!
SO fresh and new :) keep up the good work, I can't believe there's people like that in this world though.
GOOD WORK DANGALANG. Hopefully, Hannah will flourish and show her true colors. Maybe she would sooner result as a faggot fatty ! WHO KNOWS. Uhhmmmm.
Ooh I really love this idea! Maybe a few grammatical errors...but the idea is pure! That barista lady really had it coming!!


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