hi i love your story but u have 2 grammar mistakes just wanted to tell you so you can make the story even better good luck=)
i love it !!!! I cant wait for the next part and i agree with @Emilestie he is such a jerk!
(GASP!!) they're mates but he forgot her birthday!! :'( awesome stroy keep writting!! :) ♥♥
that was such a good different take on what could of happened im glad it has though and not something cliche cant wait for the next chpt!
awwww i love it, but its sooo sad. do they stop being immortal after they kill all the rouges? or do they stay like that?
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