This was amazing. The emotion you displayed in this is intense and beautiful. I felt like i was there with Angelica. (:
Wow, this is probably the MOST intense emotional chapter I have ever read. In my whole life. Very well done.
@TrilliumAngel I was like that too! I was all "999?? Whataat!?" then I read the comments and there!
Oh my!! It's so sad! :( Poor Angelica!! I really loved your descibtion in this part! I could really see it! :D
I love your writing style and the descriptions are great... your dialogue seems believable something that is hard to find here... so yea, I loved the start....
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