Dark Deep Down
Raven. Eve. Shaggy. Kelly. Ira. Char. Peggy. All of them are linked to one another, all of them are powerful, and all of them are females. As the girls grow up and the women mature, they learn about love; or relive the pain that they already know. But this is not a love story. This is a story about loss and pain, about agony and tourture, about sisters and villains. And as a war against something unknown, something unheard of, threatens the already decaying sanity of these females...well, sh** happens. Warning: you will be covered in blood by the end of this joyful ride. (btw...i'm really bad at descriptions)
Recent Comments
IvoryAuthor
Good start. One thing: when you wrote, "...deep, sweetheart neckline..." you may want to fix the formatting. Besides that, keep writing!
The description is amazing, it was a bit confusing, but in a good way. A few errors I winced at some bits...
*rocks back and forth in bed* Why didn't I read the warning, mommy? Nah, I'm kidding. That was really good. (x
Ooo! I like this! It's different from what I've read. I usually don't read this kind of story but this was nice
@tyguy777 Here are my corrections: Your paragraph describing the woman: one of the last sentences *generous* Next paragraph: *No! He*
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