good as story! love greek mythology but the story sounds a tad bit like Percy Jackson
That was good, it draws you in with the first lines, which always makes me happy, and this chapter set the scene nicely :D
Good start so far. The only thing regarding author notes, is to not beg readers to vote for your chapters. You are on a very good pace and keep it up!
I LOVE Greek mythology SO good. I know what it's like to not get alot of comments so...... C O M M E N T Also, I'm on a sugar high! Keep on going!
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