:) I like it.. I voted. But I'm not reading on, Sorry. I'm sure this is going to be a great story though.!
Really nice start :) You are doing really well now that it is your first fantasy :)
@scarymm No problem, aha. Just a quick question; is her name pronounced 'Lee' or 'Le-ah'?
I liked the interesting start. Definitely leaves one guessing. Also, Lea is an awesome name. Just saying. x)
i think is an interesting start! no mention of anything magical or whatsoever, but it leaves you guessing! :)
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