@AlexHoran I like it though it's really good :) It was only really the first chapter xxx
Kind of reminds me of the disney film starstruck.... Some of it is almost exactly like it, but not all of it... Good job, can't wait to read on xxx
I just noticed i commented on the wrong part i meant the one where harry was at kelsies old house :)
I think this is awesome. Just a tip, make a new paragraph for each new speaker coz it makes it confusing. That's all :)x
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