Oh and sorry it's taken me a while to get to this, very behind in my reading at the moment. Cheers, Gav
I like the prologue. It is so cool to see the "other side" when human were kicked out of Eden. I wonder what this is all about :)
@evangheline - no worries, no hurry. It ain't going anywhere. Always good to get a comment =]
That was a great chapter :) Your writing style is so different to what I am used to and your description is amazing :D
hmm...This was an interesting start to the story, I really want to know more. Good Luck in the wattys :D
I like the part where you describe their father, the descriptions that mirror his entire family.
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