When i started reading it i thought i wouldn't like the story but it was awesome :)))
You need to place some commas here and there to cut the monotony. Good job, though!
wow I really like that poem at the begining! Did you really write that? It's beautiful and perfect for story :)
This is really good, :O. I don't usually like vampire books but this is just amazing. Your writing is so detailed it's just so good. Voted :)
Wow I love this! It's so beautifully written and caught my attention right away. Really descriptive and great flowing words. I'm jealous (:
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