Thought I'd round the comments up to 180. Great description and I wanna keep reading
great start! I love the hint of mystery in this chapter. good luck in the watty awards btw ;)
quite mysterious! I like that :) This seems like it has a lot of potential and seems like a very good story line, hence why I voted! :D
Wonderful start! I really enjoyed this chapter, and I thank you for the invitation to read it. Sass:)
@PamelaBudden aww this was rlly good (ima fast reader) im deff gonna keep reading :)
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