The story is great so far, its cool that you can get people hooked on to your story with suspense and all that stuff... thanks for letting me read this!
I feel sorry for Hyori that she was an outcast in school, I think Bom will be friends:) I like the story:)
OMG! your writing is soo good!!! i stopped writing mine but im writing another one with my friend:) check it out....the user is luvbball101
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