I Like it and I Love it! This is pretty hilarious! Awesome, Amazing! Voted and put it in my reading list.. :)
This book so far is really interesting and you seem you know your games :) the plotting is well and your flow goes smoothly :) voted love
You had couple of mistakes in this chapter, you also don't need to put words in caps to make a point, and good details.
So far I love it! It's hilarious!! Cliffhangers, that's how you get more reads! Lol Oh, and if you want I could edit your chapters for you?(:
Interesting... Funny enough, but please fix the grammar mistakes : It'll make people think you're like a pro or something
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| Name | Decka.A |
| Location | Ontario |
| Member Since | Aug 29, 2010 |
| Votes Received | 248 |