Perception

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yme123 By yme123 Completed
Homeless and savagely beaten, Amy Mair sits waiting in a police interrogation room. She witnessed the murder of a friend and the police want to know more. But what can or will she tell them? 
    When everyone sees the world in a different light, is the way she or society saw him the way he saw himself. Who is right? Will it even matter in the end?                                           
    
    © yme123 2012 all rights reserved
its an intriguing work..congratulations on finishing the book ..looking forward to your next work. .
this is probbly the best story I have read in the past decade!
awesome writing.  some sentences don't make sense, consider having it proof red if you are going to publish it.  great story and suspense
This is hilarious, lol. I've never seen this before (a page of dedications and stuff like that), so it's funny and original (to me at least).
Good use of dialogue. Expressions need work. Story pull the reader along; nice flow. Metaphors a bit off. Verb tenses need work. When will edited version be available? Overall, taking into consideration this is a work in progress, I give it a solid 7/10. You are talented. Keep up the good work!!
So like, is that the ending?! ;( oh my goodness, I could cry if this book doesn't have some sort of add on! Well. Your book was good. Is this part of a series?