I could see the scene in front of me with vivid detail! wow... thats all I have to say
This is so sad. it touched my heart. you are an amazing writer and I hope you continue
this was really good. At first i didn't think u were goin to kill them off but u did and for that it made a good story.
@FluoroGirl Wow I love it! I feel bad for both girls though, they didnt deserve to die. D:
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