Till There Was You (Completed)

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veradis By veradis Updated 15 days ago
Just another short and sweet Valentine's Day story.

Meet James Montoya. For the first time in his life, he is in love. She's the one, and James just knows it. It's Valentine's Day, and he is dead set on finally telling her how he feels. James isn't the most romantic guy in the world - you know, that guy whom all the hopeless romantics dream of - but that doesn't stop him from trying his hardest to be. Follow James as he tries to tell the girl he truly loves those special three words. 

[Rough Draft] READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. This was the first story I ever wrote so you were warned. Trust me, I know it needs a lot of cleaning up. I literally want to vomit every time I reread this hunk of fluff.
TheLetterL TheLetterL a year ago
LOL :D seriously, his puppy dog face is probably my favorite detail in this story AHAHAHAHA,
kavin2306 kavin2306 2 years ago
Oh.. Il b here read whatever u write... U have all my support..!! ;-)
kavin2306 kavin2306 2 years ago
I read abt the future chapter and il b waiting for it... N it was my pleasure reading the story.. I lyked the way u wrote it and also its from the guy's pov n that too the whole story which is rare n so I lyk it even more..!! :-)
Snowflakexo Snowflakexo 2 years ago
@veradis There's really no need to say that love, I'd love to see more of your work and even better if published. Keep it up :)
Snowflakexo Snowflakexo 2 years ago
@veradis Aha np, I'm sick in bed and reading love stories with a box of tissues next to me being the hopeless romantic that I am lol.. But I have to say you're a REALLY talented writer and I love this, great job :)
Snowflakexo Snowflakexo 2 years ago
@veradis Sorry I got a bit personal but I just HAD to ask cuz that's just me haha, but anyway, it's a really good story and you should consider entering it into the Watty Awards :)