Aww I wish I had that father-daughter relationship. Cool Story keep it up. *voted
Ha ha, this is cute and funny. But, I would be disciplining me a child. I don't put up with that crap. Anyways, good start. Hope to read more..
great concept. she reminds me of my brother...except not the same. lol. it sounds really good. wanna see more. (:
This was a pretty good start. I think this story would pull readers in (if they like this kind of story, no offense, I'm just not that into romance). Good job!
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