A Story in Rhyme

7 Part Story 1.2K Reads 96 Votes
JamesDSwinney By JamesDSwinney Updated 2 years ago


                    

                    
parishsp parishsp 2 years ago
The last line was my favorite. Not because it was the end =), but because I think it wrapped it up nicely. Good work. I also think you are a wise 15 year ole (or just really good at BSing. I will go with the former =)).
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan 2 years ago
That was a neat piece of work James, some nice imagery and a good commentary on the oddness of getting older. Nicely done, Gav
SissaRomanova SissaRomanova 2 years ago
Beautifully done, James. It really shows the dilemma of growing up. I truly enjoyed and related to this =]
ChocoholicLover ChocoholicLover 2 years ago
This was beautiful :) It kinda makes me think of going through life and never questioning it, never sinking deeper to find out the greater joys and hardship one will go through. I freaking love the cover!!! Its so beautiful!!!!
SilentNiaAngel SilentNiaAngel 3 years ago
OMG!!! I LOVE POEMS I'M A POET TOO U CAN CHECK MY POEMS OUT IF U LIKE. DAMN THIS POEM WAS GOOD=)
parishsp parishsp 3 years ago
i enjoyed the rhythm, but also the imagery. definitely walked away with some provoked thoughts, (and i think that is the point, no?). nice work ;)