That was a neat piece of work James, some nice imagery and a good commentary on the oddness of getting older. Nicely done, Gav
Beautifully done, James. It really shows the dilemma of growing up. I truly enjoyed and related to this =]
this was actually incredibly good, honestly i thought if it was about war it wasnt going to flow as well as it did. i really enjoyed reading it!
OMG!!! I LOVE POEMS I'M A POET TOO U CAN CHECK MY POEMS OUT IF U LIKE. DAMN THIS POEM WAS GOOD=)
i enjoyed the rhythm, but also the imagery. definitely walked away with some provoked thoughts, (and i think that is the point, no?). nice work ;)
A nice fantasy base poem, I liked the structure of that one too, the style suits the genre well. Nicely done old son. Gav
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