Two Hearts, Twined together, One life, One death
Hey! great one! I never expect that kind. Uhm. Amazing! maybe you could just fit together the group of lines. The spaces really kinda annoying. Oh well, that's my opinion. Hope you read my poem as well. Thanks. http://www.wattpad.com/3253693-everything-under-the-sun-1-physics%27-romantic-side