Modern Day Lovers

1 Part Story 26 Reads 1 Votes
DreamingInReality By DreamingInReality Updated 3 years ago
Two Hearts, Twined together, One life, One death
ToonMe ToonMe 3 years ago
Hey! great one! I never expect that kind. Uhm. Amazing! maybe you could just fit together the group of lines. The spaces really kinda annoying. Oh well, that's my opinion. Hope you read my poem as well. Thanks. http://www.wattpad.com/3253693-everything-under-the-sun-1-physics%27-romantic-side