I love it. Like, for real, it's amazing. Your description is really good. I'm definatley intrigued...Voted :)
Interesting . Always loved a dramatic start . But fantasy is really not my thing . I like this . Descriptions are good and clear . Keep up the good work :D
Ohmy, what happened to George? Sad. :( Anyway, great prologue. Intrigued already. :D
Awesome start! It was very detailed and very interesting, I can't wait to read more!
Wow. I saw everything clearly. Vivid to the last line. I enjoy reading stuff as descriptive as this. Nicely written. I think I'll keep on reading.
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