The Alpha And Omega Of Magic

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TigerBee By TigerBee Updated 11 months ago
"You're taking a risk . . . a very fatal risk." Dartel's voice rang in her ears.

Shawna Tucker is at a new school for the gifted. When she comes across an age old Kyanite stone, she decides to keep it a secret. The unexpected occurs when she is transported to Laiezant—a jewel town studded between exquisite vineyards. As history repeats itself and truths of deep depths are unfolded, Shawna is on a whirlwind where she rediscovers thrill and romance.
fall-out fall-out 8 months ago
Oh gosh this just brings me back to English class on Mondays, for when it's time we learn about Descriptive Writing. :')
PeaceAndLoooove PeaceAndLoooove a year ago
I love your book a lot.It's very creative and interesting to read.Keep up the good work!
carikitty carikitty 2 years ago
no error at all. the pacing is good too. the only thing i noticed is the spacing between each paragraph. you might want to minimize them to make it more look, professional. hope that helps
Collision Collision 2 years ago
This is just... wow! x) You have some serious talent, my friend :) Even though I'm not too keen on reading these types of stories, I'm already hooked on this one! xD Good job!
taliciaem taliciaem 2 years ago
I love this beginning!! Short and sweet too. Excellent job keeping the tense as well. That is something I really struggle with in my writing. Your writing style is fantastic btw! :)
NightRose154 NightRose154 2 years ago
This is a really interesting prologue! The descriptions are really great and its really well written too! I'm intrigued to know what will happen next! :D