Wow, this is amazing! Your descriptions are wonderful and your sentences flow beautifully :) Great job! :D
wow. this is a pretty start for ur story :)) i actually loved ur descriptions! they are amazingly well written and omg. they r just too good. im so voting.
The way you started it, is kind of over used in the wattpad world, but you did have good descriptions, and saw no errors.
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