A Brown-Eyed Girl
Kelsey has been haunted by her father's death ever since she was eight years old. Now, he is turning up in her dreams. Or at least that's what she thinks they are. She learns quickly that nothing is really what she thought it was. Magic is real, there's a chance she could see her father again, and some people might actually be worth trusting. Particularly, one good-humored, green-eyed person.
Most importantly, her brown eyes are more than the only decent part of her looks. The color of her eyes is the key to who she is, what she could become, and the power she has only to unlock.
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erlebnisse
I didn't have time to finish this first chapter, but what I've read so far is fantastic. I can't wait to read more!
you are a really good writer, you didn't use the right word for some things but the ending was awesome
I would just like to say that this was extremely well written. Your descriptions were vivid, and I enjoyed reading so far. On to the next chapter!
The last sentence in the first paragraph on the fourth page is missing a word. Other than that this is impeccable. I really enjoyed reading it!
@NocturnalWriter13 don't worry abouts having one thing right when everything is right! I am glad you like my comment. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)
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