Wow, that was really, really good! I'm going to add this to my library so I can finish it. I really like this! =)
Whoa, it's just the prologue but it's so intense!! :) I'll read up the next chap to really know what's going on, it's kinda fuzzy right now.
I am total hooked, you could write a whole book and I know I would buy it. Great job please keep the chapters coming.
I have read this before, but it is just as good the second time round. Flows well and nice use of descriptive words. Voted.
Wow, this text was amazing, I loved it, when are you coming out with chapter one? I'm so happy that my friend @Kiroki have been bragging about this site,: D
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