I've never read any horror books before, but as a prologue, this is a pretty awesome start :D your grammar is correct, and its smooth and pleasant.
Wow! This is amazing! Your description is WOW! And so is ur detail! Amazing! Great job!
@ThePeach No worries i really enjoyed reading it and i thought the whole idea is great esp in the ocean/sea/water/boats that part! if u get what i mean haha
whoa :DDDD you're so very awesome at descriptions! (yes, the redundancy is necessary!!) very few errors but overall, IT'S AWESOME!!! :DDD update soon!
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